I dont wanna cry..
dont wanna crib....
this life is hell
and makin me sick.........
whatever you do whatever you say...
is all in vain...
they neither forget..
nor forgive...
nd treat you like brick...
I dnt hve a heart...
it doesnt pain...
go hide your tears..
walk in rain...
no one sees...
noone care...
you cry or die...
noone is there...
4 comments:
SAD!!! LIVE IT UP GAL!
SAD!!! LIVE IT UP GAL!
Didn't I warned you against the usage of slangs, it makes the whole thing look kiddish, takes the depth out of it. Ill-effects of SMSes I guess.
But, the poem is great, short and powerful. I wonder hum sare khandaani sad poet kyo ban gye ??
hanji i will take care of this thing...
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